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 A book of free verse poetry for children/YA published since 1995.

Teste, Maria. 2003. Almost Forever. Cambridge: Candlewick

     Press.  ISBN0-7637-199-5

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Available from http://www.goldcreek.act.edu.au/. Accessed August 8, 2005

   

   

Testa, Maria. 2003. Almost Forever. Cambridge: Candlewick Press.

     ISBN0-7637-199-5

 

Almost Forever, is an emotionally charged verse novel told from a six year old girl’s perspective. This story tells how one letter received on Christmas, changes the life of a family. The narrator’s dad, a doctor, has just received a letter informing him that he has been drafted into the army and will be going to war. “Daddy opened/ the envelope /slowly./ unfolded the letter,/ and said only one word:/ Vietnam.” 

 

Each chapter chronicles the life style that she and her family experience during the absence of her dad. Every day routines keep the family together, like walking to the post office and playing on the swings. During the absence, the young narrator and her brother strain for any glimpse of their father while watching TV. Testa shows this in such passages as,  

“Hey, Dad,”

 my brother would whisper

sometime,

“where are you?”

Testa also shows how war can strain a family with the skeptical nature of the narrator in regards to her mother’s obsession with watching Mr. Roger Mudd, the war correspondent. The narrator believes her mother is in love with him, when in actuality she waits to hear of any news about the war. On the other hand, humor is also incorporated to ease the emotions, when the children are laughing at Roger Mudd’s last name.

Like any six year old, she has worries about forgetting her father’s voice and that he might be injured in the war. Testa shows the hopeful innocence of children with the prayers the young narrator says every night.

“Our father

            hail Mary,

                        angel of God,

help me

help me

help me remember

him.”

 

Testa reveals the frustration of a child who cannot understand words such as “escalation/ and casualties/ body counts” when listening to the news of the war. The author uses repetition in order to emphasize the anxiety of the family when they learn of the disappearance of their father. This is revealed in the passage,

“Mama’s voice

was steady

 and strong

 repeating

 Daddy’s name

 and rank

 and numbers

 so many times

 steady and strong.”

 

 

Testa’s use of poetry breaks and white space show that this verse novel should be read slowly and with emotion, stopping at all the breaks. The author also separates the story into chronological chapters beginning with the departure of the father until his return, to emphasize the different periods in the child’s life. The shortness of each chapter further emphasizes the intensity of these moments in the narrator’s life.

Testa’s heartwarming poem is not melodramatic, but sensitive and real as she shows how tough life can be when your only six years old and words like “war” are only subjects you learn about in school. Almost Forever is a great read for children ages 9-12. A great book to read out loud and combine with non-fiction books on the Vietnam War

 

Reviews


”With delicacy, sensitivity and extraordinary imagination, Testa once again proves herself to be an exceptional wordsmith and has created a book that could be telling the story of any family, at any time, living through any war. Reviewed by Reviewed by Marya Jansen-Gruber

Available from http://www.kidsreads.com/reviews/. Accessed August 8, 2005

 

From School Library Journal.

 “is a tender, insightful story from a perspective too often ignored-that of a soldier's child.” Lee Bock, Glenbrook Elementary School

Available from www.amazon.co . Accessed August 8, 2005

 

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